Thursday, April 19, 2007

Chapter Four: Painted Faces and Long Hair

Most of the kids were playing on the sand not giving a care in the world just having fun and trying to find more fruit to eat. Ralph and Piggy were talking about creating some sundials from sticks and pieces of wood without chunks of metal. Jack and the choir were trying to hunt a pig without anyone noticing they left the fire.
Jack having the confidence of a leader coloured his face with charcoal. This helped give confidence to his men to continue with him to find a pig and bring it back to the group to feast on.
Ralph was relaxing from the onslaught from Piggy's ideas and saw a tiny ship in the distance and started screaming and showing everyone where the ship was. He lead them to the top of their fire mountain to get to make the fire bigger to attract the ship's crew to rescue them. When they arrived there they found no Jack or choir, just smoke and wood. Ralph was furious and started searching atop the mountain for Jack and his crew. In the distance he found them carrying a pig with grins on their faces.
Ralph and his crew ran towards Jack and the choir and started questioning why they weren't at the fire trying to keep it alive while they bring a dead pig and ship deserts them. Jack was getting angry for being blamed and was trying to defend himself with giving the story to them about how he killed the pig and the blood rushing out. Ralph wasn't pleased at all and made an assembly occur and told them all that the assembly will go into the night until everyone knows where the must be at all times.

2 comments:

phillywilly said...

Good job with the post. You have good paragraph structure and cover all the important ideas and some of the insignificant ideas. Keep working hard

Lord of Sexyness said...

Well written, I don't see any spelling mistakes, so I don't think you have any =). Good Job and keep posting your great work =]~